The Official Writing Challenge
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And as you showed, the moment we take our eyes off our surroundings and turn them to God, our grumbling turns to praise. And God inhabits the praise of his people.

And you are a blessing to your husband.
The feeling of an inner monologue was very engaging in this piece. And the message had a lot of depth!
I didn't know it before, but now I know for sure you are blessed despite your grumbling wisecracks. Humorous and poignant at the same time - I enjoyed reading your story.
Oh how I enjoyed the read! It was great and I love your writing! The repeating line made me smile each time! That was a good tool to use in writing this particular piece and you chose to use it well. I hope I see this in the EC's! You left out a few words, but it's so hard to proofread and even when I proofread a hundred times, I still manage to omit a word. So sure you know that and have already slapped your head! Good use of images throughout.
Excellent moving and touching story that held my attention from the first to last word!

Thanks for sharing your heart with us.

God bless~

God bless~