The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow- that was a highly graphic and intense read, and a summation of that which is going on in the world right now which made it all the more jarring.

This certainly nailed the topic and more.

God bless~
Frightening. Thanks for all your hard work. Best of luck in the Challenge!
Powerful story and so true. Just this last week there was news story about Christians in the Middle East being thrown overboard off a some ships. You presented a gripping story. Well crafted and written.
Oh, this was gripping. Beautifully written and expressed and gave me cold chills. How can men be so evil? How can they receive joy in their depraved hearts while doing such a thing?

And they do it in the name of their God.

This is just excellent and should do well in the challenge.
Wow, I agree with the others - you nailed this one. Gripping and intense; the type of story that grabs you and will not let you go. This is not one that will be soon forgotten.
Powerful. Gripping.Frightening.
Your story pulled me in and still hasn't let go. Great job!