The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! Truly this was a blessing! Thank you for sharing this God penned piece!! Heartfelt, raw and honest, this captured my attention and was so relatable. Although just a bit long, it flowed. Because of your vulnerability it engaged me to follow along to the end, where I could agree, personally, that through it all, God is with us and IT IS WELL WITH MY SOUL.
What I like about this poem is it shows your passion...the emotions are strong and raw...but it also shows His compassion. Thanks for sharing.
Amazing. I love everything about this! You have a gift!
Absolutely powerful and engaging in terms of inspiration!

God bless~
Inspiring, challenging, full of hope and promise for those who are willing to let go and allow Him to be All.
How long, O Lord, how long? I think most of us have related to that thought at one time or another. Thanks for all your hard work, and good luck in the Challenge!
God bless~
Congratulations on ranking 3rd in your level and 12th overall! Happy Dance!
Brenda, what a beautifully penned free-verse poem! Each trilogy of listed words was stunning. Many congrats on that ribbon that tops the page! (and you are a natural poet!!!)