The Official Writing Challenge
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04/09/15
I didn't realize where this was headed at first...but once I did then the praying ladies made sense. Gripping story. All was not well her soul after all...until she gave her heart to Jesus, of course.
What a beautiful story, well told and relevant. I like the way you used contrasts to present the main points...
04/14/15
Excellent and powerful story. You've managed to bring the topic to life in an outstanding way.

Great job with this! I hope it gets noticed by the judges.

God bless~
04/14/15
You've done so well at telling this story. Thank God for the little girl whose life was saved. Powerful.
04/15/15
Great storytelling. Thanks to God for the baby. Best of luck in the Challenge.
04/15/15
Wow - I love the way this starts, I was totally blindsided, had no idea where it was going. Kudo's to a great entry!
04/16/15
Congrats!
God bless~
04/17/15
Congratulations, Gary, on your EC placement for this moving story, very well told.