The Official Writing Challenge
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04/09/15
Our lives are indeed like rivers. I like the line "I figure I only have a few chances left." That made me laugh. Thanks for sharing.
04/13/15
This is absolutely beautiful - love the voice. I was right there with you. Thanks so much for sharing!
04/14/15
I loved this descriptive and uplifting peace...it was poetic to read, and heartwarming.

Thanks.

God bless~
04/15/15
Nostalgic river ramble I thoroughly enjoyed. Actually my husband and I canoed with a group called the River Ramblers for several summers, and happily we currently rent a place on a river bluff overlooking the Mississippi. They do seem to hold a certain power over the soul...
04/15/15
I like rivers too. And I love the peacefulness of this story. My favorite line is, "the hand that carves the riverbeds will faithfully direct the currents that will eventually carry us home – if we’re willing to take the plunge. Thanks for writing this, and good luck in the Challenge!
04/16/15
Congrats!
God bless~
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