The Official Writing Challenge
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Great job retelling this story! Good choice on the name for baby Moses, I liked that. :)
Hope this does well!
03/13/15
A great job with this. I really enjoyed the emotions and the set up with this familiar story.

The name Hadriel was perfect, "Majesty of God" excellent job, I loved it.

God bless~
03/13/15
And/or "Splendor of God." I love it either way. Well done!

God bless~
03/13/15
Wonderful description and dialogue! A very pleasant read! An old story brought to life once again. Great job!
03/14/15
Seeing Moses' parents pray for him and how God answered was great encouragement for me to pray for my kids. I've always focussed on God's care for Moses, and I'd missed out on thinking about his parents. This piece was very inspiring. Nice job.
03/18/15
Wonderful storytelling. Good dialogue. Interesting and encouraging. Great job.
03/19/15
Congrats!

God bless~
03/19/15
Congratulations on your HC Ranking!

Wing His Words
Congratulations on ranking 4th in your level and 14 overall! Happy Dance!
03/20/15
This is such a deep emotional story. It allowed me to perceive how great a faith the mother of Moses had and acted upon.

Wing His Words
03/22/15
How hard it must have been for Moses parents to give him up. What faith they had in God. Thanks for reminding me. Great job!
03/29/15
Beautiful story of faith, hope and love.