The Official Writing Challenge
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03/02/15
Wow- powerful and important message in this piece.

Excellent job.

God bless~
03/05/15
I like this piece. There's truth here. Sad ending. Good job.
03/22/15
I was able to picture Elin clearly from your descriptions, and she ably reflects the attitudes of many. It's devastating when hard hearts are never softened. You've well captured the product she is of her upbringing.