The Official Writing Challenge
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02/15/15
An intriguing, insightful and thoughtful piece of writing which explains great truths. I think this is very well done.
This is fantastic on many levels. It's very clear what it's about and it brings out the point that revenge is not the way of the narrow path, and will ultimately lead to destruction. My only red ink is that the line about the Lord being compassionate etc is from psalms and that wasn't in the reference list.

This was such a cleverly done and unique piece, I'll remember it. That makes this piece a winner, in my eyes.
Sorry, me again! I wish we could see the pieces at the same time as writing a comment. It wasn't the Lord is compassionate (that's the first bit of the verse I was thinking of), it's the Lord is slow to anger etc. Apologies for that!
02/17/15
A most creative take on this topic and most effective. Well written.
02/18/15
This is favorite so far this week. Well done.
02/18/15
I haven't read John Bunyon, but I love this fable. Your entry is creative, thought provoking, on-topic, and SO well-written. I hope this one does well.
02/19/15
Congrats! I knew this was a winner.
02/19/15
Well done
02/19/15
Congrats!

God bless~
02/19/15
Congratulations Zacharia, on your placing for this superb piece. Well deserved.
02/19/15
Clever bridge across to Pilgrim's Progress, and well-written Congratulations on your work.
02/19/15
A huge congratulations! I'm so excited for you! Well done well done well done!
Congratulations! Awesome job and I'm not surprised to see it placed so highly. I have a feeling you'll be in Masters before long.
03/22/15
Great message, and a great read! Thanks so much, and congratulations!