The Official Writing Challenge
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02/16/15
A very different and original take on the topic. A well written and graphic piece that draws to an unexpected ending with a message of hope. Now go sit on the naughty step for giving me nightmares:)
02/17/15
Wow! A chilling tale with a fantastic ending. This is brimming with emotion.
02/18/15
Very well written. Cold and calculating, on topic and a nice twist at the end. Good work.
02/19/15
congrats! I knew this one would do well with the judges.
02/19/15
Congrats Alan!
Great job.

God bless~
02/19/15
Congratulations on an exceptional piece. I was totally hooked.
This is brilliant! You had me holding my breath as you built the suspense. I loved the ending and didn't see it coming. I wonder if I had seen the title before reading (I'm terrible about not reading titles) if I would have seen the ending coming. I think this is the best piece of yours I've read and it's definitely one of my all-time favorites. Congratulations on ranking 3rd in your level and 16th overall. Happy Dance!
02/25/15
Disturbing...but then, that is what rage and uncontrollable anger is. Great writing. Congratulations.