The Official Writing Challenge
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02/09/15
Now THAT is sloth! Cute take on the topic, with a fun twist. Thanks for sharing!
02/11/15
This is a creative children's story. It would better with a little more conflict/trouble. I like the corn-on-the-cob description. Try to use more of your own comparisons. I can see this made into a children's book with a little more work.