The Official Writing Challenge
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01/25/15
Oh this is heartbreaking. We need to remember there is a story behind every case of obesity, before we judge others of this sin. This piece was successful in its impact; I was very moved.
01/25/15
What a deeply disturbing piece, so sad and jarring in its delivery and content. But, powerful in meaning and the message. Excellent job with this weeks topic, and a memorable entry for sure.

I did have a favorite part of the entry, this line made me smile: Steve recalled hearing Missy say, she felt like her heart had grown legs, and was walking around outside her body.

Great writing!

God bless~