The Official Writing Challenge
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Great piece - I like the way you have shown us the actions and attitudes of Ben and his parents. I also like how you show it from the three character's perspectives and how each character's attitudes and past behavior have contributed to their current dilemma.
Great work! It brings out something I often overlook; there are perspectives besides my own. Covering 3 with just 750 words had to be a challenge. my favorite description was 'crumb-tacky fork'. Amazing:)
Excellent account and perspective all within the word limit. Well done, powerful and creative.

God bless~