The Official Writing Challenge
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Great piece - I like the way you have shown us the actions and attitudes of Ben and his parents. I also like how you show it from the three character's perspectives and how each character's attitudes and past behavior have contributed to their current dilemma.
01/24/15
Great work! It brings out something I often overlook; there are perspectives besides my own. Covering 3 with just 750 words had to be a challenge. my favorite description was 'crumb-tacky fork'. Amazing:)
01/25/15
Excellent account and perspective all within the word limit. Well done, powerful and creative.

God bless~