The Official Writing Challenge
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01/15/15
Wow- that was a very suspenseful tale! Great writing and build up until the climax of the story.

Excellent writing.

God bless~
01/16/15
I didn't see that end coming, very well done! Only one small critique, I thought his final comment to her was a bit out of the blue, otherwise I was really impressed.
01/16/15
I may not sleep tonight. Good job!