The Official Writing Challenge
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12/12/14
This was certainly a different and out of the box creative read! I enjoyed it...very good, and entertaining. WEll done.

God bless~
12/13/14
Wow, that's an angle that I'd never imagine! A well told story from a flea riding atop Mary's donkey...Who'da thunk it? I'd only caution when retelling stories from scripture, it's best to never change facts and, while the wise men are included in every Nativity Set for sale, the Bible clearly states differently. But all in all, a very creative 'tale'.
12/14/14
So glad you didn't flea from the challenge of tackling this well-known story from a different POV.
You've clearly had fun, and I thank you for sharing it wi.th us
12/18/14
The Visit Of The Wise Men (Matthew 2:1-12