The Official Writing Challenge
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Nicely done. Both captive by the traders, and captive to sin. I think you did well not to tie up the ends too neatly, but give a hint that God is at work.
11/20/14
Good writing, good story, and good message. Well done.

God bless~
11/27/14
Well done Gary. You really did capture my attention and I was really looking forward to see how this would end. The ending was good as well.
Keep writing.
11/29/14
Congrats!
God bless~
Congratulations on ranking 2nd in your level and 11 overall! Happy Dance!