The Official Writing Challenge
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Does the meaning change or do we perceive spring differently as we get older? That's what this piece brought to mind for me. Can't comment on form--rank beginner especially in poetic stuff.
One or two errors here and there. Many things you enjoyed about spring when you were young, but now you see it from a spiritual perspective. Thanks for sharing.
I think this would be better as prose paragraphs, and then expanded...more about your feelings for spring, then and now.
I would have liked to have seen your reflections expanded further - what you liked about Spring as a child and what you appreciate now - and then conclude with your lovely thought that God is with us regardless of the season of life. Keep writing.
Short, sweet and the Bible verse goes beautifully with your thoughts of Spring. Nicely done. God Bless.