The Official Writing Challenge
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10/30/14
Good message. There will be a time when we are all "powerless" - good title. Well written but missed an end quote on one line. Powerless, true powerless, is a feeling I've had only once and it's a time to rely only on God. Mercy rejoices in mercy. Thank you.
10/30/14
Wow--intensely jarring and powerful close.

God bless~
10/30/14
I was sharing your article with my wife over lunch; when I mentioned there was only one time in my life I felt powerless the Holy spirit spoke to me and asked, "Why only once? What about all the rest of the time?" I've got some soul searching to do - your submission had God's desired effect on me. Thank you.
11/02/14
Excellent - thanks for sharing your creative entry.
You did a nice job on this. I recognized the one name immediately and thought it quite clever. Congratulations on ranking 6th in level 3!Happy Dance!