The Official Writing Challenge
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10/30/14
Wow - that was pretty ingenious! Well done.

God bless~
11/01/14
Yow! Knives cutting into poor Jack's face! Will the torment never end? I should have gotten the hint from, "Was that smoke he smelled? but didn't. I finally got it at the end; a cute surprise. So well written. What a gift you have.
God Bless
11/01/14
So glad this turned out to be a carved Jack-o-lantern and not a grisly murder scene. Very "cleaver"...lol