The Official Writing Challenge
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10/18/14
Great story - won't you and your son enjoy such stories when he grows up into a creative, driven, successful young man?
10/18/14
Such a good read! It was entertaining and so well written.

Thanks.

God bless~
10/21/14
This is one of those episodes that will have great cringe value on a future family occasion like a wedding.
Some clear para breaks would make it easier for readers to catch our breath along the way.