The Official Writing Challenge
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This story has a lot of potential. Stella sounds like an interesting person and you've created some drama around the conflict between Stella and your father. I like the way that the situation provided a testing ground that brought you closer to God. However, I felt the ending could have had a little more detail. Perhaps you could have given a specific example to show how something Stella did brought you closer to God. But I found the premise really interesting and it left me wanting to know more.
10/10/14
Wow- what a powerful testimony and story. Prolific closing.

God bless~