The Official Writing Challenge
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10/10/14
Awww!

This was touching and gripped my heart. Well done, thank you for sharing.

God bless~
I really enjoyed that story. I just bought a new puppy 12 days ago so I can certainly relate to the randomness of getting them to behave for a photo. My puppy's become quite a celebrity on Facebook. I liked the way you moved from humor to a poignant ending where you're still waiting for a response. You made engaging use of the one-sided conversation and your descriptions made the story come alive. Well done.