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09/04/14
Wonderful story, very well written. Well done.
09/05/14
This story was so well written. It had many levels to it, emotions, messages, and a perfect wrap up. Excellent work

God bless~
So lovely . . .

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Hugs and prayers, Judi
This is beautiful. It tugged at my heart, was spot on target, and you did a wonderful job with developing the characters. The dialog felt real, and it moved the story along at the perfect pace. The only red ink I spotted is sceptical, which I found out is an approved UK spelling of skeptical, so you actually taught me something new and important. I enjoyed this delightful read from beginning to end.
09/11/14
I missed giving remarks on this but I did read it. Congrats. Very well deserved.
09/11/14
Beautiful story; very well written. Loved the lesson.
Congratulations on ranking 4th in your level and 20 overall.