The Official Writing Challenge
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Excellent message in this well written piece.

God bless~
Oh, this is great. I loved the visualization of this concept. This would make a lovely devotional, and a quite clever one, at that.
Brilliantly written and wonderfully uplifting Diane! I love the voice of your MC as they go thru that selfishness we all experience as we jealously protect our blessings. But you so nailed it on the head when you gave such a visualization of your MC sharing the last of what they had with someone who had none.

What a great picture of mercy you have painted for us here with your words. This is definitely one of my favorites this week so far.

Thanks for sharing it with us!
I love this. Thank you.
Incredible writing. Excellent use of the topic. Full of truth. What else? It's great.

Gotta be a winner.
Oh beautiful. I have no words... That was VERY powerful.
Lovely! I enjoyed the message.
I just adored your piece.
The word pictures you created were tangible and potent.
One of my favorites thus far.
An excellent message delivered in a powerful way.

Congrats to you. I felt this one would be a winner.
Blessings to you.
Congratulations. Very well done.
Wow what a brilliant analogy. Jan would be so proud of this piece as you nailed it in the lesson she gave on analogies. You brought tears to my eyes and this will go into one of my all-time-favorite pile. It's wonderful to see you blossom from the good writer you were when you joined FW a mere 6 or 7 months ago to the Master artist you are today. This story is a beautiful blessing and a great way to showcase the Bible verses you based it on. Congratulations on your EC. Happy Dance!