The Official Writing Challenge
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08/28/14
Very powerful, intriguing and interesting. This is one of my favorites this week.

Very well written.
08/28/14
Excellent...brilliant and captivatingly moving.

Well done.

God bless~
08/29/14
Great lead in to this story. You captivate your readers with descriptive language that sticks. Well done!
08/31/14
Well, what can I say..? It's truly beautiful. Well done. Very good story and you had my complete attention. A real winner.
Wonderfully descriptive - a great read.
09/01/14
Wow! Excellently written. You did such a great job of illustrating what is described in scripture and in giving us a first-hand POV. You built the anticipation to hear what Jesus was going to say so well...I felt like I was your MC waiting liking a thirsty man to hear those words.

Great, great job!
Wow! You have some amazing talent. You did a wonderful job of painting an awesome mental picture. Your MC's pain and then joy was palpable. You developed all the characters. This is a stunning piece.
09/02/14
Extraordinary imagery. Creative telling of Truth to come. Well done
09/04/14
Excellent work!

Congratulations.

God bless~
09/04/14
Well done...congrats.
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