The Official Writing Challenge
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08/28/14
Very nicely written with humor and truth. I like it a lot.
08/28/14
I enjoyed this piece! Good info and message.

God bless~
08/29/14
Perhaps you will get a chance to read this at a Christian poetry slam - great use of rhyme, and great lesson here.
This poem told an interesting story that kept me riveted the entire read. There was one point when he looked at his wife and I thought the pornography belonged to her. That would have been a brilliant twist. Most people don't think of females liking porn. I still liked the way you handled it though. You did a nice job of building the suspense about his secret. It may have been a tad weak on the topic (even though you used the topic words, I would have guessed the topic to be secrets or sins), but the message was clear and strong. We all try to hide from God sometimes, but he knows our hearts better than we do. Nicely done.