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I liked the little twists and turns. Strong story with a good message, but with a bittersweet ending for the mother.
08/28/14
Oh so touching, so chilling and then so miraculous.

Nicely done.
08/28/14
Wow---an amazing story that was sobering and jarring... Yet, the ending was inspiring and uplifting.

Excellent job with this piece.

God bless~
08/30/14
I think you probably meant to use the word innocence in the phrase: Keys of purity and innocents
Thanks for sharing a moving story with important moral attached.