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07/24/14
Your story is compelling and heartbreaking as well as hopeful.

Although I did see a typo or two, you did an outstanding job with the topic and the telling.

Thanks for sharing..
Exquisite . . .


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07/25/14
God bless the missionaries that answer God's call.

As for that man with the tumor, praise Jesus for saving His soul. We can lead them, but only Jesus does the saving.

Excellent story. Thanks for sharing.

God bless~
07/25/14
Beautifully written. Someone else mentioned the typos and I have nothing else to add. Wonderful piece.
This is a powerful story. I can't imagine such a thing and am reminded how blessed I am. Again, I find myself stopping to pray for those who can't imagine owning a tablet, watching TV with a full belly. You did a fine job with this piece.
What more can I add to the comments already made? Keep up the good work. God bless you.
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