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07/24/14
A very touching story that plays out in America many times a day.

Thanks for sharing.
This is beautiful and horrible simultaneously. I understand how the devil uses words and makes us believe them. I felt an overwhelming sense of sadness as I read, but it was replaced by hope and love. You are a gifted author and your words may just save someone tonight.
07/27/14
A sad, moving story with a positive ending. I think you mean "clenching pen and paper..." rather than clinching.
Thank you for sharing this powerful message about restoration and forgiveness.
Very powerful beginning that sweeps the readers into the story! Good message of hope.