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06/12/14
This is a great story. I loved the wording, "Those clowns are just sandpaper to you, shining up a diamond." Nice work!

One suggestion: You need to separate your paragraphs with proper spacing.
06/13/14
This was very clever and completely unpredictable (which I liked). The ending was tops! Great story!
So imaginative - and a happy ending to boot!

Please consider spacing your paragraphs. I had to reread one area several times to clarify to myself - but then I am one year older than I was day before yesterday.

I love your writing!

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06/17/14
I adored this story! It was fresh, creative and had a great ending.

Being bullied throughout my school years, I identified with the MC so much. I was so hapy with the outcome, and I loved how Jesus was mentioned to bring all of what happened into perfect clarity...great message. Great story.

God bless~