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Topic: Vote/Voted off the Island (05/29/14)
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TITLE: The Earth is One Big Island | Previous Challenge Entry
By Wesley Hesketh
06/02/14 -
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ADD TO MY FAVORITES
no place to go or come.
The water is so very close
the waves a constant drum.
My life on this world
is how I’ve made it be.
Always sin beneath my feet
I’m trapped and can’t get free.
As in the universe,
there is a right and wrong.
The Creator hears all things
throughout this earthly song.
I know since sin is endless
there’s no place for it to go.
It stares out at the people
all the ones it knows.
But there is one that has saved us
the one that has a vote.
He has all our previsions
He has the biggest boat.
His name is Jesus,
the savior of the World.
He gave his life for passageway
upon this constant whirl.
His life’s the calm sea
as we journey home.
To be with the Creator
never more to roam.
With him at the rudder
we no longer have to fear.
He’ll guide us through the darkest storm
just know He’s always there.
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I'm just a passing through.
Well written lines.
I would have like the last word in the last line to have been the word "here".
Nicely chosen rhyming word groups.
We have to be thankful for what Jesus has done for us and not question his word but just obey.
Good work on this poem.