The Official Writing Challenge
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06/05/14
Peaceful and beautiful read!

God bless~
Exquisite. Absolutely lovely.
This world is not my home
I'm just a passing through.

Well written lines.

I would have like the last word in the last line to have been the word "here".

Nicely chosen rhyming word groups.
The length of the lines and finding the right rhyming words are hard to do. Thank you for your hard word in this.

We have to be thankful for what Jesus has done for us and not question his word but just obey.

Good work on this poem.