The Official Writing Challenge
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04/17/14
I love a good poem! Your rhymes weren't forced and your meter was consistent. Good message too.
04/19/14
Loved your message and your take on the topic. Well done.

God bless~
Easy to follow the meaning from beginning to the end.

Good pattern of rhyming words. These did not seem forced.

Good thoughts throughout. You did well expressing yourself in this poem.
Very creative and heartfelt. The poem flowed smoothly and made for an enjoyable read. Good job!