The Official Writing Challenge
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Interesting approach to the topic at hand. You certainly can tell a good story.

Nicely done.

God bless~
Interesting . . . I think we'll be needing to find more and more ways to relax in this world.
Nicely written and interesting.
Thanks for sharing.

God bless~
Congratularions on your first place level win! This was very creative and so current. I love that you used a false description of "chillaxing" to emphasise how dangerous some of the world's means of peace are. Very well done!
Ha ha! I meant to say Congratulations, not congratularions. My fingers and smart phones are not well matched. :)
Congratulations on ranking 1st in your level and 11 overall. The highest rankings can be found in the message boards.
Wow! This is really intense. I found my back aching when I was done because I kept leaning in closer and closer to the screen. You took my brain to such a sudden leap from wondering if I shouldn't mix protein with starches (a must at my childhood dinner table) to the true nature of the antagonist. Outstanding job!