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I enjoyed this. You captured the feel of winter well and I liked your analogy. Well done.
I like I really don't dread it too much--the sun shines in winter too. I liked your thoughts anyway..looking at a different view. God bless ya, littlelight
The 5th stanza is my favorite. The warmth of His love melts the coldness we have within. Very nice.
Yes, you captured the winter times in our soul when it can be so dark. I love the sun and I loved your phrase, 'I am a Child of the Sun.' He is always there reaching out to us, even when we can't see Him. I LOVED this.