The Official Writing Challenge
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Excellent! Great job with this entry, I thoroughly enjoyed it. It had an authentic tone to it as well.

Good message, and good writing.

God bless~
I enjoyed the male point of view in your story. It is written well and interesting.

Thanks for sharing.
So true. Too often people go into it thinking about what they want to be saved from, not thinking that "Repent!" came before the "believe on the name of the Lord Jesus Christ."

Your story will help me to remember that when I witness, even though it's easier on me to give the "soft version," people need to hear the true version. Great writing!
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