The Official Writing Challenge
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This poem is truly beautiful and so powerful. You've touched my heart and made me cry, what lovely amazing words, and the message was overwhelming!

Simply amazing in every way, another masterpiece my friend.

I loved it, your poems are mesmerizing.

I pray the judges will take notice of this fine entry.

God bless~
You are most certainly blessed with the gift of poem writing. I thoroughly enjoyed your article. I hope it places somewhere in the top winnings. Nice job!
What a masterful work of art. These words flowed so gracefully from heartache to comfort. Well done.
Yay! I finally got to read one of your poems! And it's wonderful. You really do have quite the gift for it.

I just have one thing... and it's just my opinion, but I wish that there was an exclamation point at the end of this line "Mercy come and rescue me," to add to the drama and intensity of what's happening. I know punctuation in poetry is a funny thing.

Great work, my friend. I hope it does well with the judges!
Hauntingly beautiful! Your poetry speaks to me.
Truly beautiful!

I don't often read poetry, but the imagery in your words carried me away.
This poem creatively makes the narrator come to life, revealing so much in such a short time. Beautiful poem.
I agree with all the comments-it is a beautiful poem.
I too hope it is noticed by judges and fellow readers alike.

What a beautiful, beautiful poem you wrote. It's a winner with me!

Great job!
Hello my friend! You are an excellent writer, and I enjoy reading your work so very much. This is an excellent work that should go into our venture!
Wow what a powerful piece. I could so totally relate, especially the line about hope. This is beautiful. Congratulations for ranking 8th in your level and 19 overall! Happy Dance!!