The Official Writing Challenge
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03/08/14
Hi Rachel. Yet another extremely well-written story. You are an editor's dream!

Oh, wait-a-minute... I just noticed a big problem... the article is ranked as "Advanced" and it clearly should be labeled "Master".

;-)

Buck
03/09/14
Oh, I can think of nothing to say about this except unique, original, and excellent. I loved this story. To think that one day people might look back on us that way. Chilling.

Blessings, Lynn
I really enjoyed your excellently written story. You did a great job of keeping the suspense high.
03/09/14
You have quite an imagination. I was hoping they would find the bible amongst the books.

Great job! Blessings, LaVonne
03/11/14
You are quite the story teller! Nicely done in content and delivery.

Good job.

God bless~
03/11/14
Suspenseful, imaginative, great read, blessings!