The Official Writing Challenge
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Your entry is interesting and creative and depicts a truth we often ignore in our dog eat dog society.

Well done and thanks for sharing.
Powerful story in content and delivery.

Great messages throughout.

God bless~
I know you were looking for red ink, and I tried, but this is just too good. What a fantastic take on the story of the talents. You have a gift, my friend. Positively brilliant. I hope this finds favor with the judges as it is very deserving.
Creative and excellent with an powerful message. What a fine writer you are.
Nicely told. The one sentence that jarred was when you had Jesus offer "a white robe, a crown, a mansion in His city, and eternal life." Granted, the first three are mentioned in Revelation, but Jesus uses other metaphors in the Gospels, such as eternal life, living water, bread of Heaven, etc. As your story was a retelling of one of his parables, I should have stuck with Gospel terminology rather than apocalyptic. Nevertheless, a poignant reminder of the importance of fidelity in Christian service.