The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/14
Powerful and emotional!
Great ending with Jesus.

God bless~
Good job describing how our sins and failures to find earthly love can lead to thoughts of suicide. Nice ending leading to the truth that when we accept God's love, he does not forsake us.
He saves us.
02/18/14
A powerful battle well described. Jesus is always on time...seldom early but never late.

Well written.
02/19/14
Powerful story. Love the play on the word/name Destiny. I wish there was more about how she got to that place in her life, but I completely understand how the word count can sneak up on someone. Great job.
02/19/14
This is a poignant and compelling come to Jesus moment. Very well written with a perfect ending. I can relate to Destiny, yes I can. Been there.

Very well done!
02/20/14
This was is great story, and one lots of folks might relate to. Jesus is always the answer, no matter the question. Keep up the great work.