The Official Writing Challenge
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This is such a touching story that is easy to read and full of emotion.

You did a good job of making your MC sound real and using your memories to move the story along.

Well done and thanks.
Sweet! What a happy memory.
Beautiful. Wouldn't change a thing.
This was so good. I have tears in my eyes.

God bless~
Thank all of you for your comments! Exactly what I hope and pray for in my touch someone!
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