The Official Writing Challenge
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This story hooked me right in till the end. I had to read the last sentence twice-its flow just didn't seem to fit with the rest of the story. Otherwise, I really liked it!
11/24/05
It's Thanksgiving Day. I have been reading submissions for over an hour and THIS IS THE FIRST to touch my very soul! Tears come when I read something beautiful, and your writing is skilled to the point of perfection...(in my humble opinion). Thanks for sharing; it was easy to read-easy to digest-and easy to fulfill a Readers search for something solid and beautiful! God bless.
11/25/05
I loved it all the way to the last sentence. It all seemed to tie in so well with the rest of the story. Very nice work! God bless ya, littlelight
What a great story, Mary. A touching tale of kindness and love, told in a loving way. It was a blessing to read and reflect on how important family is. May God continue to bless your writing. Congratulations on your win. It is well-deserved, indeed.