The Official Writing Challenge
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Heartfelt prose/praise indeed! I love His Heart within you.

I have a smear of red ink to help. You would make this more readable if you put double lines between the sweetly expressed thoughts. For example:

"I'm Looking in the mirror but it's not really Me
with thoughts of the future set with uncertainty.

Am I too far gone now?
what have I become,
Praying to God
To not let me succumb
but to overcome . . ."

As I read through this again, I see the beautiful poetry flutter its wings to my heart. Thank you.
Judith has good suggestions on formatting, so I'll just comment on the content. Your message was inspiring, hope-filled and uplifting. Thank you!
Short, yet concise and powerfully moving! I loved it.

Thank you.

God bless~