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Lovely relationship between father and son - great interplay.
Lovely relationship between father and son - great interplay.
Lovely relationship between father and son - great interplay.
Lovely relationship between father and son - great interplay.
Whoops! Looks like I really love it - and I do ...
02/04/14
You did fantastic work of weaving this story with some back-story and with poignancy. Super work! I was completely immersed and enjoying the progression of this.
02/04/14
Two words --- LOVED IT!

God bless~
I am not sports oriented and know nothing of baseball - but I do now about relationships, and this is a well told story of a good one. God bless you.