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I don't often comment on poems, but I like your humor in this one.

Easy to read. Thanks for sharing.
Humorous take on a task so many of us have to face in the New Year. Thanks for sharing!
Cute! An ongoing struggle. Your humor makes it bearable . . .
What a delightfully funny approach to the topic at hand!

Great job.

God bless~
This made me smile!
Although you did well with the rhyming, it seems rather forced at times. The rhythm of the lines could be smoother.
I liked the analogy of the battle... so true!
I love the rhymes and humor in this, especially about the rice and beans enabling our heroine to fit into her jeans. Ha ha! Thanks so much for sharing.
very fun! made me smile!
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