The Official Writing Challenge
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01/23/14
I don't often comment on poems, but I like your humor in this one.

Easy to read. Thanks for sharing.
01/26/14
Humorous take on a task so many of us have to face in the New Year. Thanks for sharing!
Cute! An ongoing struggle. Your humor makes it bearable . . .
01/27/14
Hahahahahahahahahahaha!!!
What a delightfully funny approach to the topic at hand!

Great job.

God bless~
01/28/14
This made me smile!
Although you did well with the rhyming, it seems rather forced at times. The rhythm of the lines could be smoother.
I liked the analogy of the battle... so true!
01/29/14
I love the rhymes and humor in this, especially about the rice and beans enabling our heroine to fit into her jeans. Ha ha! Thanks so much for sharing.
01/30/14
very fun! made me smile!
Cute, but seriously a great resource for a lifelong approach to this issue is Trim Healthy Mama, written by 2 sisters who have tried everything and discovered how the science of food can greatly improve your health and decrease your waste line. Google or search on facebook