The Official Writing Challenge
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Very well told! That was an interesting twist, having Steven being a guy who was working on his doctorate. At first, I was with Natalie, wondering about the poor homeless fellow and sympathizing with the mother, but you had a great twist in here that changed that all around.

Excellent characters. Thanks for sharing!
This is a beautiful story. I love the compassion of the Mom even though her heart was hurting she took that pain and by focusing on others discovered the pain of losing a love one can be dimmed a bit. The ending was great too. You really did a great job. Congratulations on ranking 6th in level three!! Happy Dance!!