The Official Writing Challenge
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Id love to have your input into the free writing lessons available on the FaithWriters forums. This weeks lesson is on writing devotionals, and next week will cover writing on topic for the weekly challenge. Look for it at, or if youre on Facebook, you can like Faithwriters Writing Lessons.
Quite a story, it was plausible and certainly delivered a powerful message in the interim. Nicely done!

God bless~
Miranda handles this stressful situation remarkably well--what a strong woman she is!

I think this might have been stronger without the opening flashback paragraphs, and there were some errors in writing mechanics that could use a touch-up.

I was touched by the relationship between Miranda and her son--even though they have gone through hard times, the love is evident.