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Beautiful story. Well written. I enjoyed it so much, and the message of hope it surrendered. God bless ya, littlelight
This story brought to mind the most exquisite winter sunset I have ever seen. For each of us it holds a different message. Thank you for sharing yours.
Great description of nature. Was right there with ya cold toes and all!
very heartwarming & nicely written
How did I know this was yours dear Beth when I read before! Just figured I'd get back to it when I was sure! Beautiful as always with a beautiful meesage of hope! (as always!) I liked the pounding heart and heavy breathing (otherwise known as 'huffing and puffing! :) ) I could just see it! :) Love, Pat
Great descriptions - of both nature and the inner struggle. A soul patiently waiting for God and receiving hope - beautiful.
Beautifully told and a great reminder that winter will not last forever. Well done.
Very very good! Amazing visual images!
I loved your descriptions. Each word perfectly picked to create a beautiful picture of the setting sun. Great job.
I appreciate your vulnerability in your writing. You write with excellence, Beth, and have a gift for pulling the reader into the emotion of the moment.