The Official Writing Challenge
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11/24/13
You've filled this comforting poem with many allusions to Scripture. I love your ending, "So with that hope I will endure, -- As to everything, there is a season." May other find hope and peace in your words.
I liked the eight lines in each verse.

The rhyming words were well chosen.

Sometimes getting the right line length and finding the right rhyming words make poems difficult for many (ME as one)

Story of hope well written and easy to read.
11/24/13
Beautiful uplifting and inspirational poem.

Loved it.

God bless~