The Official Writing Challenge
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Well written entry with drama, and conflict and ultimately an ending that was pivotal to the overall message of the story.

Nicely done. I thought this clever. It's sad how often "church people" can do things that are the polar opposite of what Christ would do.

Great commentary.

God bless~
love this story. good work.
It was interesting to compare this to another entry about life in a parsonage. That was from the point of view of a wife. It must be difficult to be on show like that when life is so difficult without a mother and one's father is the pastor. Thank you and well done.
Thanks for your comments. Thanks for the placement. Can't get into forums because I've forgotten my password, again.

Blessings to all.
Congratulations on ranking 2nd in your level and 13 overall! (You can find the highest rankings on the message board.)
Congrats! God bless~