The Official Writing Challenge
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11/07/13
She wasn't a very good Christian toward her father the young MC. This story was well written and had a "realistic ending" -- and it leaves it the reader as to what happens next. I'd like to believe that with prayer a spirit of forgiveness comes over the daughter.

Good job.

God Bless~
A story with our own ending. We can have forgiveness take place and all is well or the never of forgiveness taken and her destiny is determined.

This is a good reminder for each of us that no matter what happens God does not forgive us if we don't forgive others.

Well written, full of emotion that pulls.

Thank you for the reminder that, no matter what, we have to forgive to be forgiven.