The Official Writing Challenge
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11/08/13
Wow - this was so entertaining, you have some imagination. It was an amazing way to speak about Jesus our Savior, and so interesting "seeing" it through the eyes of animals. Clever, and fun.

God bless~
This is a delightful analogy. I think you've been studying Jan's Writing Basics on the boards. This reminded me a bit of Animal Farm, but with a far bigger message. It certainly seems to fit the world in which we are living. Great job.
A fun read with a good message. Good job.
Good collection of characters for your story as well as appropriate setting.

The pig had to fly, that is all there is to it.

Wide is the gate that leads to destruction and many farm animals enter thereby.

Imagination is always necessary and combined with the common place, a nice story evolves.